Relatives found Michael Schwarze, 22, unconscious in a cabin near Longville, Minn. last Saturday. They also found his parents, Lee and Nancy Schwarze, 58 and 55, dead on the scene. Autopsy results are expected later this week.
This was a concise & tight summary. It even had a little mystery element. I think this is the story about the family that had carbon monoxide poisoning at their cabin. During this time of the year, people begin using their fireplaces & heaters. This is why it's recommended we keep a window cracked even during the winter.
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It's always sad hearing things like this. I just wonder what happened. Sounds like a possible carbon monoxide leak or possible homicide.
ReplyDeleteThis is tragic. It's always so scary when the cause of death is unknown, it really makes you wonder what went on there.
ReplyDeleteThat's so sad! I wonder what happened to them.
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ReplyDelete*Note: It would be good to include whether officials suspect foul play, as this is what your readers are wondering.
This was a concise & tight summary. It even had a little mystery element. I think this is the story about the family that had carbon monoxide poisoning at their cabin. During this time of the year, people begin using their fireplaces & heaters. This is why it's recommended we keep a window cracked even during the winter.
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